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I have watched brown birds fly south in the winter. I have seen trees turn grey with age and pale with cold. I have listened to the cry of innocence trapped. I have bred lies and sold them for meat. I have eaten words and fed my children silence. I have seen the world swallow green grass tall. I have sung the dawn-call loud and clear. I have heard my freedom’s death begin. I have known the anger of traitor’s laugh.

In the deep dark before morning when the shadows breathe cold, I have stood beneath the blackest branches of the hateful trees and smiled at the frosted path before me. I have tasted the blood beneath my skin and I will fear the rage that boils within. I have wept for the loss of knowledge and truth, knowledge and truth held ransom. I have shouted and screamed, raged and railed as the cold boughs twist in the ice-wind above. I have felt the rough collar bite my neck and I will feel the misery of forgotten sun.

I will listen again to the south-bird wings, I will trust the trees to grow green again. I will sell my words for the knowledge needed, I will feed my children the ransomed truth. I will weep for the freedom lost in time, I will forgive the traitor and heed his words. I will smile at the rage and watch it quiver, I will fight my blood for every beat. I will stand beneath the blackest branches of the hateful trees and watch the remembered sun singe the frost into oblivion. I will walk the path and sing the dawn.

I will wait and I will walk and I will sing again.
©2009-2010 ~findmeastorm
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Author's Comments

First thing I've written in three months. It's nice to write something again, even so small.

Daily Deviation

Given 2010-02-01

Our suggester brought South-bird Wings to my attention recently, and I could not stop reading it. ~findmeastorm's thought provoking imagery, though somewhat concise, is very powerful and well worth perusing more than once. (Suggested by =bekkia and Featured by ^LadyLincoln)

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:icondrjeckylandmrhyde:
WOW! What a piece! love it, dont stop writing, you have a great gift.
:iconfindmeastorm:
Thank you so much! And sorry for my slow reply. :D

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find me a storm where the wild winds blow.
:iconmytherea:
This is beautiful, truly beautiful. The way you captured such emotion, the desolation and the the spite and then the taking of it and inverting it all into a kind revenge. Very, very nicely written.
(truth be told, what caught my eye was the first few lines. They remind me of a certain character I'm writing and his veiw of the world. He never does get to the third paragraph of acceptance and change.)

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"CHEESE! For Everyone!"
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"There is no magic. There are only onions."
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...detail...you are like caffeine...addictive...destructive...yet I keep coming back to you...
:iconfindmeastorm:
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like this - and especially that you felt the spite and inversion. Spite is a good word for this piece, but I think it gets buried under the description. I'll work on it. :)

(Sorry to hear that about your character, but hey. Some never get where they should at the end of their journeys.)

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find me a storm where the wild winds blow.
:iconmytherea:
Not, not at all. The emotion in this is very upfront. Not in your face and speaking directly to the reader, but it's still there and wonderfully interwoven into the description. What I really like is that it is a passive-peace way of revenge, one that sadly is not used in most cultures and societies (especially the modern world's) which believe in striking out in violent ways. This is a very unique piece.

(Actually...he never achieves that as he dies, but he does get a taste of it towards the end. And that is very true, some never do end up where they should. It makes an interesting writing subject. Oh, and very sorry for the late reply. The previous message got buried and I only just found it again.)

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"CHEESE! For Everyone!"
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"There is no magic. There are only onions."
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...detail...you are like caffeine...addictive...destructive...yet I keep coming back to you...
:iconsqueakylex:
nice story

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squeakylex
:iconfindmeastorm:
Thank you!

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find me a storm where the wild winds blow.
:iconzenvixen:
Beautiful and inspiring. Very deep and true. Thank you for taking the time to open your mind and spirit for the world to see inside.
:iconfindmeastorm:
I'm glad you found it so worthwhile to read! Thank you. :D

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find me a storm where the wild winds blow.

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